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mostly, everything is ok, the shading is a bit, off, it's to "spread out" on Jaiden, try to concentrate more in one area than the entir...

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mostly, everything is ok, the shading is a bit, off, it's to "spread out" on Jaiden, try to concentrate more in one area than the entire character, A little bit more detail would be nice as well, I enjoy the cartoony art style although Ari looks bigger than what they should be, very amazing personality, the lines are crisp and clean, a background could be a nice touch though. the hair looks greasy and bubbly which in MY opinion isn't really a detail you would want in hairstyles(I'm not saying your drawing is bad, I really like it and it looks like you really put some effort into it)
 Hi, I'm a 13-year-old boy who joined DeviantArt because he thought,"why not?" I soon realized that the positive feedback I get keeps me determined to create more art, thank you guys for everything!

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SuperCyborg11 Featured By Owner May 4, 2017  New Deviant
hullo human.
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artisticengineer353 Featured By Owner May 4, 2017
Hello other human
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matthewtails Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2017  Hobbyist Artist
Hoi!
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artisticengineer353 Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2017
hi
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iamthejam Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2017
Welcome to DA!!! We hope you enjoy your stay.
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artisticengineer353 Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2017
Thank You!
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